I think the revision strategies that I found useful this week were the comments from others. The feedback helped give me ideas and insight to my story that I didn't come up with on my own.
My current draft is very very rough. So as far as the qualities of an exemplary narrative, my narrative possess none of those. I'm hoping that when I'm done however, it will have all the qualities.
I missed a few days this week, but when I was there we did keep the norms that the class set. It was pretty quiet an it someone had questions or needed help, they quietly asked a classmate for help without distracting the whole class.
For our argument story I would like to explore things with the media. Such as how media affects body image or the way that people view themselves. Also, the impact of gender roles and how society enforces them.
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